What 3 things what you like about life in America and 3 things that you don't like.
1.One things what I like in the U.S. are happy people or smalling people. Every time and every were they have a smile on their face. If they lost the job they smalling and they are nice. Or if they lost a house they still to be happy to I don't know if in their tart is the same smile...
2.Second things what I like is the weather. It is not to hot and is not to cold like in my country to spend a lot of money to warm a house.
3.There it is more opportunity to studying to take what we want or what we need to take .
1.What I don't like it is expensive life. It is cost a lot of money to bay a home or to have a insurance or to pay for daycare. For example one parent have to work and second parent have to take care of the children. When they have two or three children is no reason to work it is better to take care of your children.
2.Second thigh what I don't like it is hard to found a job in the U.S. If you don't have a job you can lose every thing.
3. The third thing it is relation between parents and children. It is hard to educate the children when thy don't listening their parents when they are doing something bad the parents have to answer on their problems.
This is a nice essay, Larisa. Very well-organized!
ReplyDeleteBe careful about spelling; you have a few words where you chose the wrong word to use. For example, tart instead of heart, bay instead of buy, thigh instead of thing
Use of to: too cold, too hot
subject/verb agreement: one parent has to...
tense: it is hard to find a job
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THe very last part is confusing: "the parents have to answer on their problems" - do you mean, "The parents have to take care of their problems"? Let's talk about this for a minute.